hey ! :)
u should EQ/lower the sound or compress your synth , it takes too much place in the song ! Your kick is hardly hearable then :) , The bass is nearly okay maybe just EQ it more to the lows , and compress your kick so it wont be affected by this change. Anyway , i just found that your synth take too much spaces , so it needs mastering for each sound to be heard right. I like the melody pretty much , good work on that ! :D I could see more instrument evolution also , to make the song less repetitive. You can just use more different transition , reverses , beat change over time , things like that u know.
Still this as potential to be perfect ! Good luck
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keep it up !